Mythically Loved

Rookie (August 3 / Deathly Hollows)

Sweet Suicide - Poem by Mythically Loved

Voices in my head,
keep telling me he's gone.
I wish that i were dead,
instead i'm all alone.

I sit in silence-
staring at my nothing,
wondering why i did this,
and what could have been.

He did nothing wrong,
and its all my fault.
I thought that we belonged.
Guess i needed more than thought.

My knees are weak,
and i just slipped.
I begin to shreak,
with my hands gripped.

Arms and legs, cut from a blade.
With my hands still tightly clasped-
my memories begin to fade.
Bleeding out, hoped it would last.

My body collapsed,
as his arms came around my waist.
Now that he'd realized-
he was already two minutes too late.

Date Written: 5/6/10

Comments about Sweet Suicide by Mythically Loved

  • Amy Marie (4/12/2011 7:57:00 AM)

    This is a 'sweet' electrifying poem on a fascinating topic :)
    I was confused at first, but now I get it. I love the title!
    I used to feel the same way every once in a while...and wish I still
    did so I could write things like this!
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  • (2/18/2011 2:07:00 PM)

    nice poem, i've felt this way before. Can relate. (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2010 11:39:00 AM)

    i really love this poem :)
    great job writing it :)
    keep writing :)

    Smash-Ley :)
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 30, 2010

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