Sunday, December 11, 2011

Swim Baby Swim Comments

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Swim baby swim through the waters blue
It’s the first thing a human can do
Swim honey swim the beauty surface strokes
Swim the deepest bottom glow
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Miroslava Odalovic
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Terence Craddock 27 October 2023

Long ago I wrote the poem 'Breath Short Contractions Impelling', dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic; inspired by a single potential among many possible facets in this poem.

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Terence Craddock 27 October 2023

I always found this poem beautiful, the title interesting encourages, the first four lines are beautiful appealing, the next two lines crystal mystic intriguing, the last two lines contrast universal moments in mystery water. Sometimes we must swim.

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Miroslava Odalovic

Miroslava Odalovic

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