Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Swinging Doors - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Your heart is like a pair of swinging doors,
Every time I need to give it a push
To make it open and wide,
And after I cross the threshold
It closes itself without fail.
I can’t deny
It feels good to be a prisoner of your heart.
But sometimes I wonder my dear
What if the situation changes,
Then your hands will shove my body hardly,
The entrance will transform into exit
And I will be out of it at once
Stumbling on the ground,
Again it will close itself immediately.
I can’t deny
It’ll feel bad to be thrown out of your core.
Oh how I wish
Your heart was not like a pair of swinging doors!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Swinging Doors by Sanjukta Nag

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/27/2015 6:30:00 PM)

    Heart comparing with door is so amusing and heart touching. Very nicely and wisely this poem has been speculated. Thanks for sharing. ....10 (Report) Reply

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  • (8/27/2015 1:27:00 PM)

    Cleverly worded poem, Great work, God Bless you. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/27/2015 1:10:00 PM)

    Great comparison...My Heart....always a fascinating subject to read..........I loved it.
    Please check my poem: http: // Thanks in advance......
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, August 28, 2015

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