It seems to be keeping things together:
The fox in the eyes of the girl who isn't even here:
In the playground before the sea:
The only thing that is hiding all of it from her is
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Bret, what have you added in your poems to make the readers to feel it! As usual nice to read!
I remembered the echoes of another's knuckles Rasping upon the thresh holds— And whatever joy that may have once been— - amazing 10+