Saturday, February 18, 2012

Swollen (Final Chapter) Comments

Rating: 5.0

they talked throught the night
as the candle burned down, exchanging
the stories of their lives.
then finally, they just sat in the stillness,
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Eric Cockrell
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Patti Masterman 19 February 2012

Exciting end (though very sad) . It's strange how strong the impulse in humans is, to sacrifice everything to save another..I'm sure they do scientific studies on what benefit there could possibly be, but you know- I don't think the one who makes such a sacrifice makes it lightly at all- but I don't think they sit and think it over for a long time either..best to get it over with, I think..good tale, I enjoyed it.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 February 2012

It seems to be sad, but there is true love in it.

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