Sylvia Poem by Patti Masterman

Sylvia



When he looked at their guest, there was a disturbing new look
In his eyes, a look she thought she remembered from someplace far;
From so long ago, it seemed another life entirely.

He used to look at her the same way, a million years from here,
Seemingly thousands and thousands of days ago. Suddenly she felt so old,
Much older than she was. She suspected she was starting

To actually shrink, to disappear, to become just a miniscule thing,
No bigger than a gnat, or a flea perched on a giant tack.
She was a thorn in the flesh now, one that wouldn't go away

The extra person in a group that wanted to be only two;
Three is always too many, if two wish to be alone.
Modern man has modern problems, because he wishes

To make up new rules and to live by them, to swear vows on holy books
In front of ministers, and then he imagines there is no going back.
Man makes his own problems in life.

We think life is inviolate, and change must be the enemy:
Sylvia laid her down, and stuck her head in an oven-
Problem solved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Bennett 21 July 2012

As a huge Plath and Sexton fan, I also have one or two about their lives and how they ended them. This really grabbed hold of me. I am so familiar with the story, but you put your own personal spin on it. It's unique and isn't the cookie cutter write when dealing with this subject. You handled this beautifully is really all I can say. The abrubt ending is perfect. It almost makes you wonder if that is what went through her mind. The last staza is my absolute favorite!

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