Take A Sip 03316 Poem by Felicia Moira Longman

Take A Sip 03316

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A cup of sweetness
A cup of heaven
A cup of magic
A cup of love

A cup of bitterness
A cup of hell
A cup of potion
A cup of the broken

Together, the universe thought we can be us.
Together, you set us apart
Together, we get along just fine
Together, NO! there will never be an 'us'.

Monday, March 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,unrequited love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2016

Very interesting ending. Loved it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 March 2016

A cup of sweetness......... A cup of bitterness in these first two stanzas you play with the contrasts which is very effective and then you come to the conclusion there will never be us. at the end is it very negative in view. this is my only question. a very fine poem. thank yu dear poetess. tony

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ah yes, i tend to do it like that so that it was so realistic that even two things are opposite they cannot be together, even if there is an attraction. thank u

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2016

we can be us, good thought..

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