A cup of sweetness
A cup of heaven
A cup of magic
A cup of love
A cup of bitterness
A cup of hell
A cup of potion
A cup of the broken
Together, the universe thought we can be us.
Together, you set us apart
Together, we get along just fine
Together, NO! there will never be an 'us'.
A cup of sweetness......... A cup of bitterness in these first two stanzas you play with the contrasts which is very effective and then you come to the conclusion there will never be us. at the end is it very negative in view. this is my only question. a very fine poem. thank yu dear poetess. tony
ah yes, i tend to do it like that so that it was so realistic that even two things are opposite they cannot be together, even if there is an attraction. thank u
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very interesting ending. Loved it.