Take A Vow Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Take A Vow

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Take a vow
Wednesday,8 August 2018

No, mom no
it was stupidity on my part to go
along with the argument
and act like an absent-minded man

I did a big mistake
when didn't take your advice
before giving such a promise
and suddenly I got the news of your demise

I touched your feet
and openly felt
some guilty conscience
was I stupid at once?

I ached your heart
and allowed you to depart
with the grief and agony
I feel so sorry

I take a vow
and promise to go
along with your precise advice
and shall surprise everyone

I shall be the changed man
and act as perfectly human
with no grudge to anyone
but love to everyone

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Take A Vow
Wednesday, August 8, 2018
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2018

A great poem, Sir. I have experienced the same pain. Sneha Thiyagarajan, BANGALORE, Aug 09,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2018

Such a beautiful one. Nadia Jesmine Rahman, New Delhi, Aug 10,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2018

A wonderful poem Hasmukh sir. As always imprints life's message. TFS. Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Aug 09,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2018

I shall be the changed man and act as perfectly human with no grudge to anyone but love to everyone Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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