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YOU bent me, my love,
your blades penetrated
my heart, my soul, my eyes,
leaving me with nightmares
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DAVID...PASSION- IMPACT DRIVEN PIECE, HERE...THIS WOULD MAKE FOR A NICE TWANG ON A TUNE, AS WELL, AS A GOOD READ''''''''''''''FRANK...10!
i liked this a lot David. especially the line: 'you bent me love' increases the impact you have on the reader! HBH
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DAVID...PASSION- IMPACT DRIVEN PIECE, HERE...THIS WOULD MAKE FOR A NICE TWANG ON A TUNE, AS WELL, AS A GOOD READ''''''''''''''FRANK...10!