Monday, September 30, 2024

Tangled Confusion Comments

Rating: 4.8

I had one once, but it left too soon,
Now I find myself beneath a heavy moon.
Two have appeared in this tangled embrace,
One seeks my heart, the other, a different place.
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Opeyemi Mariam Sonaike
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Every moment is unpredictable, every face is an enigma…. Good poem,5*

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Life's questions are too hard to answer. " What does my heart seek, what's gentle and kind? "

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D.N. Rebb 20 October 2024

Brilliant! One of the best poems I have ever read. Definately worthy of POD.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 October 2024

Amazing poem,6 quatrains long and so beautifully conveyed Full Marks 5 Stars. CONGRATS chosen by PoemHunter and Team your premier poem, how fantastic! Keep creating, dear Poetess

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