Tanka 13: Pretend To Sleep Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Tanka 13: Pretend To Sleep

Rating: 3.0


I pretend to sleep
as dawn splits the dark in two
and you rise to dress
under the covers I watch:
my last glimpse of your body

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Schreiber 09 November 2009

A perfect read to start the day. Everyone's secret is out.

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Susan Jarvis 27 August 2009

This tanka poses one question: is that last glimpse of the body loved or loathed? The image of the second line is lovely, and in so few syllables you create so much intrigue. An admirable tanka. S :)

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