Tanka 643 Poem by Ari Alsio

Tanka 643

Rating: 5.0


there was a girl
which tastes just a bunny
it is mistake
more carbohydrate,
it should be best for rabbits

Sunday, July 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 01 August 2016

Ha ha ha...Nice tanka..humorous and witty, nicely conceived. Thanks for giving this lighter moments.

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