Wednesday, July 13, 2005

Tanka - Depth Of Autumn Comments

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depth of autumn
all his words that
have fallen on deaf ears
he walks over leaves
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john tiong chunghoo
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Raynette Eitel 13 July 2005

All three of these tankas are well done and lovely. I like the third one best. And yet, I am enthralled at the second one, thinking of the lovely person you rejected being there beside the moon. Wonderful! Good work, John. Raynette

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Uriah Hamilton 13 July 2005

I dig the spirituality that often enters your poems.

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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