Tanka- Palm Beach Poem by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Tanka- Palm Beach

Rating: 5.0


Crisp emerald palm trees
Breezing softly with desire
On hot golden sands
Upon the crystal ocean
Where sunset gleams like fire

Friday, March 30, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,ocean,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 30 March 2007

Lisa, the atmosphere that you create in such a few words. This is gorgeous. I felt that I was on some tropical Island. Great write. Thank you for sharing it my friend. Top Marks from me. David

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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