Lee Hutsby

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Tatters Of The Mnd - Poem by Lee Hutsby

Here I lay within my bed,
The thoughts of you running through my head,
I think of you every single day,
Hoping these thoughts will clear and fade,
But you always seem to creep into my mind,
The thoughts like you are tortuous & unkind,
Why did you hurt me so bad,
Why does seeing me like this make you glad,
I gave you my all in every way,
But your demons would not go away,
I loved you so much with all of my heart,
Without you I just crumble and fall apart.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss


Comments about Tatters Of The Mnd by Lee Hutsby

  • Rajnish Manga (8/28/2015 3:51:00 AM)


    Cries of a disheartened soul have been captured beautifully in this wonderful poem that impacts the reader instantly. Hopefully the love, which is presently agonising, will regain its intimate moments in future.
    The thoughts like you are tortuous & unkind,
    .....Why does seeing me like this make you glad,
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 28, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, November 13, 2015


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