Friday, January 18, 2008

Tear Drop Comments

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A salty dropp swells up
With sorrow from a glistening eye.
It slides down slowly off the nose,
Leaving a shiny wet trail behind.
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Thistle Wargul
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Bill Smith 18 January 2008

nice write, enjoyed the read, tears always a good subject for a poem smiffy

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Jeannie Ann Clark 18 January 2008

10...! You are a very good writer. Did I read you are 15? If you are, you are on your way to being an author of a book...! Keep writing...I think I will add this to my favorites because I have cried many tears over the years. I look forward to the time, right here on earth, when we will cry happy tears, not sad ones. Thank you.

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