Tear Less Eye Poem by Arfa Iris

Tear Less Eye



when i cried a lot,
& pleaded to hurt me not,
even then my life is shattered,
my dreams are scattered.
now day & night my heart cry,
coz to shed tear, i have tear less eye
the crying have made them dry.
there is no tear left in my eye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 22 October 2011

Hello! hello! Fellow poetess! You poem seems to embodiment the saying short is sweet. when i cried a lot, & pleaded to hurt me not, even then my life is shattered, my dreams are scattered. It is fantabulous start to the poem. I wonder how you could put so much matter in so few words. Well! This show the craft of the poetess and The clarity of the poem.2 Hands up one for the poetess and another for the poem. Two thumps went one for the poem and another for the poetess for writing her TESS of D'urbervilles!

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Arfa Iris

Arfa Iris

hyderabad, A.P, India.
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