i am terribly caught,
in the whir-pool of thought.
as i miss my friend alot.
each minute for me who cares,
my sorrows and joys who shares.
in ocean of troubles who lends a hand,
& guides me safely back to land.
together spent time is my treasure,
to have such a friend is a pleasure.
now i have a lot to say,
but i cant find a way,
too far she is today.
her absence make me feel awkward,
but i pray and look forward,
for blissful boon.
to meet her soon.
dear every one painfully likes to miss his/her friend...nice ur emotion flows like rivers... Plz read my new poem TERRORIST and comment, thanks
Waoww, nice poem....such friends we do miss r had to come by as the wind sings thier ubsence evry day...i lov dis one.
This poem is amazing depiction of your bond between two bosom buddies. When we miss a friend, a plethora of feeling hit our heart. Well articulated by the poetess.. i am terribly caught, in the whir-pool of thought. as i miss my friend alot. are my favorite lines in the poem. There is way to expresses when we miss a friend, You stood tall with this poetical lines..... Simply made me sentimental fellow..... A praise of word for the poet.....Best of luck...................
send this word to ur friend she will really have tears in her eyes and would feel proud for u.......if u miss someone show them how much u miss..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very well crafted and poignant write! Rich in imagery and depth! Keep it up! 10+++ Thanks for sharing, Love and Peace for always! ...