Arfa Iris
hyderabad, A.P, India.

A Friend I Miss.

Rating: 4.8
i am terribly caught,
in the whir-pool of thought.
as i miss my friend alot.
each minute for me who cares,
my sorrows and joys who shares.
in ocean of troubles who lends a hand,
& guides me safely back to land.
together spent time is my treasure,
to have such a friend is a pleasure.
now i have a lot to say,
but i cant find a way,
too far she is today.
her absence make me feel awkward,
but i pray and look forward,
for blissful boon.
to meet her soon.
Saturday, April 23, 2011
Sayeed Abubakar 18 April 2013
You were always a good poet.
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Harindhar Reddy 20 October 2011
This poem is amazing depiction of your bond between two bosom buddies. When we miss a friend, a plethora of feeling hit our heart. Well articulated by the poetess.. i am terribly caught, in the whir-pool of thought. as i miss my friend alot. are my favorite lines in the poem. There is way to expresses when we miss a friend, You stood tall with this poetical lines..... Simply made me sentimental fellow..... A praise of word for the poet.....Best of luck...................
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Agbola Oluseyi 19 October 2011
nice one, a great and promising poet thou art
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Shaikh Haneef 16 October 2011
send this word to ur friend she will really have tears in her eyes and would feel proud for u.......if u miss someone show them how much u miss..
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Gina Albiek 30 September 2011
niice :) i think ur such a good friend ;)
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Hina Firdose 24 September 2011
Great write, arfa! ! Keep it up! TFS
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 June 2011
i think you miss your friend a lot.nice ink.liked it.
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Waoww, nice poem....such friends we do miss r had to come by as the wind sings thier ubsence evry day...i lov dis one.
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Hribhu Dey 14 May 2011
dear every one painfully likes to miss his/her friend...nice ur emotion flows like rivers... Plz read my new poem TERRORIST and comment, thanks
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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2011
A very well crafted and poignant write! Rich in imagery and depth! Keep it up! 10+++ Thanks for sharing, Love and Peace for always! ...
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