Arfa Iris
hyderabad, A.P, India.
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Stop Complaining! God Made You Complete

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Never let the grief moist your eyes,
face all the troubles with smiles.

IF you say you are not happy,
look at those who are not lucky.
IF you say you don't have enough for comforting,
look at those who have nothing.

IF you say you are fed up of crossing hurdles,
look at those, life long who face troubles,
who take birth, grow and die in troubles.

IF you say you are in pain and not at ease,
look at those who suffer with chronic disease.
IF you say you are in grief,
look at those who never get relief.

IF you say you don't have best,
look at those, even basic needs who don't get.
stop complaining about your fate,
value it, before its too late.

always be thankful to god,
you are fortunate, he blessed you lot.
be happy and satisfied.
stop complaining and kill the greed.


still if you curse your fate,
then look at these people,
you will feel yourself fortunate.

look at the limbless man NICK VUJICIC
you will cry but you will learn to smile.
look at the diseased scientist STEPHEN HAWKINGS.
you will wish for death but you will learn to live.

look at the blade runner OSCAR PISTORIOUS
you will feel week but you will learn to be strong.
look at the mother PAULINE with no arms to hold her child
you will be angry but you will learn to be soft and mild.

for the world these people are diseased and 'incomplete'
but their spirit, no one can never ever defeat.
they are the people haunted with 'incompleteness'
but they live life, as if they own world of happiness.
Lars Haris 04 November 2011
ill ac2ally stop complainin thanks
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Alex Manson 30 October 2011
this really cool, i like it alot. nice talent, arfa
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Ramesh Rai 30 October 2011
Dear Afra your poem is complete.In fact in natural course we are doing the job assigned by God and we have to repent which we are doing at our own will. In most of my poem there is discussion on God. plz. send your opinion with best wishes ramesh rai
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Asif Andalib 25 October 2011
Consolation and inspiration are must in our life. This poem has got the both. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.
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Bella Hernandez 24 October 2011
wow hella deep Iris. glad i read this poem people shouldnt look into their mis-unfortunes instead they should look at those who have it worse than they do. that way they can learn to be happy and to try to help those who need the help God has really given u a gift to touch so many people with your poetry. what ever you do DONT STOP! great poem. really liked it with all my heart. ur Friend Bella
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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011
The examples you used there are always part of my smiles when i am down, you really smart in what you said, portray you are smart in what you thinking...That's how you are wise and make you know less than keep up and up even surrounding just make us down and down, you have good way to find a happy key and i am sure you will always get peace if you keep it like this...Such the amazing poem you wrote here, thanks for sharing and sorry for late replying :) _Unwritten Soul
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Harindhar Reddy 22 October 2011
IF you say you are in pain and not at ease, look at those who suffer with chronic disease. IF you say you are in grief, look at those who never get relief. These are remarkable lines which i read now. I wonder the way the poet pick the topics and each time comes with Genuine topic related to humanity. Bingo! Humanity is lost i shout! Yet this poem shows still a human being is sensitive. let me doff the poet for nature style..
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Amit Gunji 22 October 2011
Nice poem! :) I liked the title very much!
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