Tears

Rating: 5.0

The light drizzle
Does little to help
Lift the gloom
But settles the dust
Raised by
Unwanted thoughts.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Kirkwood 18 February 2009

Powerful, beautiful, and so true. Thank you.

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Rachel Clark 18 June 2005

So true! like all your poems it was short but still very powerful...

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Allan James Saywell 10 March 2005

Deepak must mean deep thinker, you thought about this, i love short pieces of art Warm regards AJS

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Cj Heck 10 March 2005

This is very good, Deepak. I enjoyed it very much. Short, sweet, and to the point, so the sad feelings shine through to the reader. Warmest regards, CJ

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