Deepak Amembal


Tears - Poem by Deepak Amembal

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The light drizzle
Does little to help
Lift the gloom
But settles the dust
Raised by
Unwanted thoughts.


Comments about Tears by Deepak Amembal

  • (2/18/2009 8:28:00 PM)


    Powerful, beautiful, and so true. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/18/2005 3:44:00 AM)


    So true! like all your poems it was short but still very powerful... (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2005 5:25:00 PM)


    Deepak must mean deep thinker, you thought about this, i love short pieces
    of art

    Warm regards AJS
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  • Cj Heck (3/10/2005 9:48:00 AM)


    This is very good, Deepak. I enjoyed it very much. Short, sweet, and to the point, so the sad feelings shine through to the reader.
    Warmest regards,
    CJ
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 10, 2005



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