Tears Poem by Javier Falcon

Tears



As I cry my night away,
I notice something quite different,
the tears which once ran down my cheeks,
now feel like drops of acid.

My eyes start burning in pain,
which overwhelms other parts of the body,
damaging irreparable parts,
like the emotions hidden in my mind.

As silence is released in my thoughts,
depressing all my memories,
corrupting all the good times,
destroying my ability to think.

Even so the tears drop,
ever so slowly emptying my life,
as you have already done,
letting me here without you, alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
May Namoc 17 July 2008

ahahaha...E M O. and i wonder how u weren't named emo in that survey u took..... but anywayz, its good hunn. i wish to kiss ur acidy tears away but u know, that would be painful on both parties. so i'll just think of other ways to comfort you. lol. awesome poem hunn. keep up the good work -two thumbs up-

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Beautiful poem, really brings out the hurt and emotions you went through. very good write Javier, they just keep getting better and better.. x3, millie

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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