Saturday, May 16, 2009

Tears Comments

Rating: 4.3

As I lay here,
curled up in a ball,
Quiet sobs shake me,
Murmurs consume me.
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Melynda Smith
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T S 16 May 2009

Sad emotional write and well penned 10 +++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Penned tears cutely that touches inside,10++

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rago rago 16 May 2009

tears.........you have penned well and gave emotional touch to the poem......fantastic write...........

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Melynda Smith

Melynda Smith

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