Thursday, May 24, 2018
Tears Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I haven't crossed my heart,
But I've hoped to die.
I don't know where to start,
I can't lie
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Justin Reinalda
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Susan Williams
25 May 2018
I like your voice- it is strong and simple [but NOT simplistic], , intense and truthful. And you can handle end-rhymes so smoooooooooooothly I am jealous out of my mind. My end-rhymes are clumsy awkward and gangling things. Powerful write.10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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3/11/2026 5:36:08 AM # 1.0.0
The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Heartfelt rendition embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A witty creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Justin.
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