aislemyth


Tears In The Rain - Poem by aislemyth

I look above
Hot tears kiss my face
The sky is crying
Stars are out of sight
I look at you
Hopelessness falling from your eyes
And pain of losing is tattoed on your soul
You seem so preoccupied,
Not noticing me
I close my eyes
You'll never know what i feel
As we stand here crying
On a night of anguish and rain


Comments about Tears In The Rain by aislemyth

  • (2/7/2018 7:03:00 AM)

    Fantastically I'ke! I also got second prize on writing poem about OUR COUNTRY, INDIA on the school competition. So I congrats the poet Aislemyth. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/26/2007 9:22:00 PM)

    Well, you have love in you which is really good to show in poetry. Your poetry was fun to read. TAKE CARE! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/25/2007 3:35:00 AM)

    wow. that is a enigmatic poem i have come across. i have also come across such feeling but never had so imaginary like you. keep it up up my good friend, good writing.
    please read my poems at www.poemhunter.com/ravi-chandran
    i will be very grateful if you comment about the poem.
    thank you
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  • (9/9/2006 5:04:00 AM)

    this is a sad and deep but very good poem,

    hope to read more of your poems

    Samual Harriso (Australia)
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  • (9/30/2005 4:28:00 PM)

    that is such a good poem! it's rly deep. nice peom tho i like it alot check out some of mine sometime (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2005 8:15:00 PM)

    aww that's so sad. But I love this poem!
    Lylyanna
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  • (4/12/2005 12:54:00 AM)

    sad theme...i like it..miss the comfort in bein sad. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 11, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 23, 2008


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