Sunday, April 15, 2007

Ten Attempts Comments

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Ten attempts at mediocrity, I haven’t got a page.
Nine pedestrian passages, empty fits of rage
Eight fragments, contrived, stilted and trite
Seven cigarettes, that burned throughout the night
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*stands in awe* i liked this poem... 'Butterflies In My Belly Forever' is right! this is a very powerful poem... read mine sometime... Love Always 3moStar

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wow. This is a powerful poem.

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Daniel Kline

Daniel Kline

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