Test Failed Poem by James Barrs

Test Failed

Rating: 5.0


Test Failed



I am ready again,
For judgment.

Stepped out once before,
As a person, Failed.

Now, I offer myself again,
As a poet, as a lover,
Lowly writer, nothing more.

I wonder how you will like me now.
It's time to take the test.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 31 March 2012

Any test we hold two result in hand, success or failed....yes we may failed once but we not stay with failure for the rest of our life, sometimes it makes the success of the future be more bolder, could be a reason that something we should learn before the happiness in ourside, please never give up in anything you choose to try, because failure is a common thing, as well as give up also a common thing but only for the person who dont determine to get success for next level....keep writing, i guess you pass the poetry level hahaha, keep it up! _Unwritten Soul

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Romeo Della Valle 25 March 2012

You definitely Passed! A few powerful words that are touching and sincere! God Bless You! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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