That Damn Bridge! Poem by elysabeth faslund

That Damn Bridge!



Opening the bridge, I wish for a ridge
With a cabin, in Colorado...

One, unheeded mistake, will rake
This bridge in flashing red lights...

My boss will ask, the Coast Guard task
Me for second-by-second accounting.

The ambulance arrives, ahead of the hives
Of Sheriffs, and fire department.

Did I mention the cup handed to me?

A Wal Mart parking lot will
Pale in comparison.

The boats drift past, and I, at last,
Close the bridge, open gates.

No car, truck, or the clerk down the
Road,
Knows how close this bridge is to
Eternity.

I do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 29 September 2008

This is a great flowing poem Elysabeth. I like the jovial feel to it whilst the way the poem maintains its integrity. The rhyme scheme works really well and helps the tunefulness of the piece.

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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