Sweet scent
of rotten leaves
which linger, lonely,
upon dark paths.
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You've such an original and wonderful way about you - this poem is no exception.
A beautiful poem with beautiful metaphors. As if it were my dream.10 for it.
Creative concept. I've never read a dark poem about a garden before, but I like it and the originality of it. Well done.
Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.