Sunday, June 15, 2008

That Garden I Dream About Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet scent
of rotten leaves
which linger, lonely,
upon dark paths.
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Viola Grey
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Lawerence Mize 12 May 2014

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Ridge Cahill 02 November 2008

You've such an original and wonderful way about you - this poem is no exception.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

A beautiful poem with beautiful metaphors. As if it were my dream.10 for it.

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Dawn Slanker 08 July 2008

Creative concept. I've never read a dark poem about a garden before, but I like it and the originality of it. Well done.

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