After forgetting for so long,
I am now starting to remember,
after the lines were drawn,
they've now been erased.
Now that you're back,
I'm starting to remember,
everything I felt for you.
I'm not saying I feel that way,
I'm saying I remember why I did.
I remember who you were.
That man you once were,
made my days oh so bright.
That man I once knew,
could turn the storm clouds away,
just for me.
That man I once knew,
he had me forget everything that I once knew,
that man I once knew,
sometimes it's hard to believe that man was you.
A very well written poem I like the repeat of 'The man I once knew' very effective. A bitter sweet tale 10/10 BB : O)
I remember who you are, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you, in all honesty, I wasn't too sure about repeating That man I once knew but I'm glad you think it made the poem stronger :)