That Moonlight Night Poem by JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
That Moonlight Night
The violins held sweet melodies
as they played romantic tunes.
Rose petals rained down from the sky
on the couple on the floor.
As they danced in the moonlight
each immersed within each others arms.
'With anticipation's breath', they kissed.
Deeply but tenderly. within themselves
passion veiled their very existence.
Vision began to blur
and their surroundings melt away.
wanting not to part that moonlight night
each breath, a melody in their heart
stars twinkling, smiling down below
a secret they hold on to...ahhh
that lover's kiss, with anticipation breath.
Moonlight, violins, and roses-What could be more romantic? Enchanting mood. Ten for all three of you. Warmest regards, Sandra
Wonderful read, great teamwork here! Everything seemed just right - on that moonlit night! Thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad
So beautiful and romantic poetry at it's best, wonderful work my friends.. Andy 10+
I think the intention here is delicious, to show that waiting...anticipating...feeling, but I must admit, I am a bit distracted by some of the halting sentence structure and the grammar? I think an overhaul of that would GREATLY improve the meaning and feeling of this one. Good work, however! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
4/25/2024 2:18:29 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It's interesting to try and work out which of your wrote which line. I do believe that the three creative souls have so coalesced that three become one. A delightful romantic piece lit by the light of the moon. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥