Scarred Unknown

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Thats It, I'M Done - Poem by Scarred Unknown

THATS IT
i'm done
i can't take this anymore
THATS IT
i'm done
i'm through with all your lies
THATS IT!
i'm done
i'll never forget thoughs eyes
THATS IT
i'm done
don't act like your suprised
THATS IT
i'm done
i'm looking for the gun
THATS IT
i'm done
you'll never see light again
THATS IT
i'm done
i'm through with all your lies
THATS IT
i'm done
lets see who's the last to cry
THATS IT
i'm done
i've got the gun
THATS IT
i'm done
i'm right in front of you
THATS IT
i'm done
i pull out the gun
THATS IT
i'm done
you start to cry
THATS IT
i'm done
how's this for fun
THATS IT
i'm done
you pleed 'no please'
THATS IT
i'm done
i put my finger on the trigger
THATS IT
i'm done
i watch you shiver
THATS IT
i'm done
i say now here is fun
THATS IT
i'm done
i pull the trigger
THATS IT
i'm done
it all goes dark


Comments about Thats It, I'M Done by Scarred Unknown

  • Wandering Scarlet (5/27/2008 2:55:00 PM)

    great poem, but a bit of advice...

    try being more careful with rhymes, as well as possibly keeping every third line at a consistent number of syllabols
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  • (3/24/2007 8:08:00 PM)

    I like the surprise at the end. You would think that you are going to kill him but you kil yourself. Nicely written. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/17/2007 2:44:00 PM)

    i love this poem.... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 2, 2011


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