The 4 Steps Poem by Tiffany Wolf

The 4 Steps

Rating: 5.0


Wish

For the talking to
stop: Shut your
eyes, forget your
surroundings.

Yearn

To block out hate,
Demolish the
crimes, forget
Everything

Long

For the past to
erase, throw away
memories. throw
away thoughts.

Pray

That forever you
will know your ending.
Stop the worrying,
Stop the pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steven Hoon 22 April 2009

Wow... I could feel the confusing and mixed emotions in this poem... Good job... A+ work

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yo, this is the smigits(I'm making up words again) .. again you found the right form and set the right mood for the words you laid down.

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