The Acceptance Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

The Acceptance

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The acceptance

In the dark, narrow road a horse followed him like a starving dog
Its rib cage was showing, and the horsey face had the sad look
Of one unable giving vent to the eternal grief of being a burden.
He walked into the church found a confession boot and began
Talking, as he did a strange light filled the boot and he understood
Everything, without consciousness he would not be human,
Only like a psychopath who feels nothing and has no emotions.
Lifted by the revelation and said aloud: "I'm a human being."
The burden was left behind the horse had gone he was forgiven
by his acceptance of being a humble person who did the best he could
in the journey through life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2019

Everything may be felt but without consciousness human values are not felt at all. Having a great journey of life is beautiful and this poem is excellently penned.10

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