The Angel Of Night Poem by Daniel Brick

The Angel Of Night

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Silence guided me into sleep, and
left me on the dark side of reality.
Part of me sleeps, part of me wakes:
I hear a low him of music nearby.
It strikes my hearing like a slow flood
of Gregorian Chant, enveloping
rather than drowning the listener.

There will be time enough in the night
to say good-bye to the flesh, to bid
farewell to mortal affairs, to uncoil
all the entanglements of time, to feel
what remains of a lifetime stretch out,
so that my mortality touches eternity
in an infinite moment of renewal.

In the natural field of existence,
I am a poet, that is, one who dreams
with words - day and night alike -
and makes life take on the texture of
reality and poems embody hope.
The future is illuminated, and a space
opens for the present to flourish night and day.
The Angel of Night will greet me again and again.

Thursday, January 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: journeys,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Searching Soul 23 January 2018

Whilst sifting through the sand of most poems on here I came across this diamond which shone bright above all others. The intimate quality it holds of quietly inviting the reader to enter a dreamlike state kept me captivated throughout. But this is no ordinary dream poem. It does not simply describe a dream for the reader to view. It absorbers the reader in the feelings of the dream state.

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Daniel Brick 23 January 2018

You have earned your pen-name with this deeply perceptive and clarifying commentary on my poem. You articulated my purpose more concisely and also more completely than I could do. Thank you for this layer of interpretation that will open my poem to other readers and indeed myself as well. CAPTURING THE DREAM STATE is exactly what I hoped in this quasi-surrealist poem.

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