Tuesday, June 9, 2009

The Ballroom Comments

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then, the cups were clinkin'
and the drunk men were singin'
about hopes for tomorrow,
and the weather that night
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Taher Shemaly
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Ejaz Khan 09 June 2009

What's wrong with her being mother of ten or twenty, she couldn't wait for a sobbing loner for rest of her life. I hope you'll do something about your approach, now that you have learnt your lesson. You expressed the situation nicely!

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