Sunday, September 6, 2009

The Battle Of Life Comments

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Death was smiling unseen;
everywhere brave hearts fought;
blood poured in like flood in the land of drought;
the general closed his eyes as screams tore;
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Aparna cordelia
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Malavikka Sridharan 28 September 2009

Nicely brought out. Thanks for sharing and also for reminding us of warriors...... Eager to read more of your work...

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Rakesh Bedi 07 September 2009

A nice poem, aparna; depicting loyalty and bravery of an army head........

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Omar Ibrahim 06 September 2009

touching poem full of emotions.......good piece!

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 06 September 2009

Very inspiring poem having implications to our life. Heroic action by the army head.

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