VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Gold Star - 10,297 Points (17 DEC / Ooty)

The Birds - Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

How Cute, the birds fly,
Under the beautiful sky.
How cute, builds the nest,
Where it goes for the rest,
How cute, it makes noise,
Created with beautiful voice.
How cute, creation in nature,
But we need to protect its future.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Bop


Comments about The Birds by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

  • Tom Allport (6/16/2017 3:59:00 AM)


    a poem of observation of not just nature but also the need for humans to protect it? ............well written (Report) Reply

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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/22/2017 2:35:00 AM)


    You are a observer of nature. Your poem reflect that. +++10

    Full marks keep observing, and writing.

    Thank you for reading my poem.
    Robert
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  • Indira Renganathan (2/9/2017 7:50:00 AM)


    Bird watching is very interesting....it actually connects us with the infinite....a good short and sweet poem- 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Hari Prasad (2/7/2017 12:14:00 AM)


    Excellent poem . Birds must for ecology, we must preserve the nature for them to survive and vice versa. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (2/4/2017 11:47:00 PM)


    I too am a bird-lover. I liked your poem which tops your list at PH. (Report) Reply

  • Muzahidul Reza (2/4/2017 12:03:00 PM)


    The Birds is an excellen poem in wisely thinking, thank you for sharing the poem with us (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (1/29/2017 9:36:00 AM)


    How cute, creation in nature,
    But we need to protect its future.
    Verily and verily
    (Report) Reply

  • (10/29/2016 12:31:00 AM)

    Nature's bounties
    Natures gifts galore, are unending. The world is livable only because it is garnished with birds, animals, plants, flowers, fruit, everything including man.- In spite of what man does to the nature! Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Mubeen Sadhika (10/19/2016 4:24:00 AM)


    Very cute poem. Nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Mubeen Sadhika (10/19/2016 4:22:00 AM)


    Very cute. Sounds rhythmic. (Report) Reply

  • Mubeen Sadhika (10/19/2016 4:13:00 AM)


    Very cute poem. Nicely rendered. (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (10/16/2016 7:49:00 AM)

    The Birds
    How cute the bird flies... In every odd line, the repetition of the word, 'cute' reminds that the poem is cute and the poet is cute. For your nature loving heart, we have praises a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (5/19/2016 1:09:00 AM)


    How cute is the nature, how cute is the creation.Nature keenly observed and nicely described.10 (Report) Reply

  • Chan Mongol (5/17/2016 12:09:00 PM)


    A very well folded eloquent with the strong theme of environmental issue. I like all poems with rhythms and rhymes.. Because, I don; t write haiku and I don; t understand but many might and its OK for them. Anyway, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2016 10:47:00 AM)


    A correct message for the importance of birds (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2016 10:46:00 AM)


    A correct message for the importance of birds and its protection (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/22/2015 3:42:00 AM)


    The birds of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (10/30/2015 3:49:00 AM)


    Indeed, a very cute poem on birds. Loved reading a poem on birds. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/15/2015 12:46:00 AM)


    As a child I used to follow birds. Even after growing up watching them is always a pleasure! So I like to read anything about birds! Enjoyed this cute little poem on birds and appreciate its neat rhyming! (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (9/25/2015 12:13:00 PM)


    sweetest poem.liked much (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2015



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