Wednesday, April 18, 2007

The Blank Page. Comments

Rating: 4.8

The blank page rested upon the desk before me.
Yet no matter how hard I tried,
No words could I find to describe my aching desire to be with you!
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Jack E and Rosie Blennim
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2020

The blank page is resting on the desk before you but all of your dreams are reflected on this page because a peen can do magic over it. You close your eyes but your memories revive in mind. You can write beautiful poems on such blank page. You remain beside your thoughts. This poem is excellently penned.10

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Ben Gieske 16 May 2007

I liked the approach and development of this poem. 'The carousel of thoughts' and 'whispering images from the past' caught my fancy. I was reading some of William Blake's poems before reading this and came across one of his verses, 'Imaganation has nothing to do with Memory.' I can understand your 'Blank Page' and 'no need of the blank page any more'.

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