The Bleeding Paradise Poem by Drishika Shah

The Bleeding Paradise



Our heaven is treated like a bird in its cage,
its unable to walk on its own, as in old age.

I come from place known as heaven on earth,
but here our mothers mourn after giving birth.

Now this heaven is renamed "The bleeding paradise"
in India and pakistan half of our heaven lies.

My heart aches when i hear the cries,
Each day a couple of us dies.

You harass our sisters, you kill our brothers,
you leave us with our beloved silently dying father.

kashmir will rise and bloom like a flower,
with happy homes and families, it will never suffer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pragna shah 22 July 2019

Well done drishu I proud of my lovely betu

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Kalpana 22 July 2019

Well done ,very nice , keep writing continue

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Harsha 22 July 2019

Very well written Drishu keep writing Good πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

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Neha shah 22 July 2019

Superb Drishika . Keep it up 😊

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Nayan Shah 22 July 2019

Very deep thoughts, way to go drishika. Keep it up😊

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Mahendra shah 23 July 2019

Wow Superb πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Mahendra shah 23 July 2019

Wow Superb πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Pradip Shah 22 July 2019

Beauriful thought.

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Manju Garg 22 July 2019

Well done betaπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Varsha 22 July 2019

V.good drishika.god bless u

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