Peer Pressure: The Agonising Heart Poem by Drishika Shah

Peer Pressure: The Agonising Heart



Peer is a great fear;
And this fear of peer can even make the near & dear queer;
And it always ends with a tear.

You are your parent's only child my dear;
So why do you get frightened with peer fear?

Sometimes the pressure is too much to bear;
That you feel your death is so near.
At times it feels like a spear;
Tearing your heart is very rare.

Peer pressure is unnecessary but is always there;
It has destroyed many but nobody seems to care;
It is useless and dumb is much clear.

We hear about students suicide every year;
For friends and family it is so difficult to bear.

Peer pressure is the true culprit here;
But what is the cure for this fear?

Yoga, meditation, lots of love and care;
Can cure this evil I can swear.

Dear parents, don't be sad if your child is prone to peer fear;
Together we will fight against this evil, until it is all clear.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when i heard news of students taking their lives under peer pressure, so i thought why not to write a poem on this.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha thakre 28 May 2019

Bahut achhe drishika welldone

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Varsha thakre 28 May 2019

Bahut acche drishika very nice lines welldone

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Nitu Singh 28 May 2019

Keep it up

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Rahul Chinchalkar 28 May 2019

Very well penned. Its surreal. Keep it up.

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Manju Garg 28 May 2019

It’s the reality of life. Nicely expressed 👌👌

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Swati 28 May 2019

Well done , congrats

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Anand 28 May 2019

Sweet Drishika. An excellent poetess.🤴Keep writing.

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Bijal 28 May 2019

Well done Drishika...keep writing..will wait for next one..all the best

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Mahendra shah 28 May 2019

Very nice n true poem.. Keep it up 💐

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Jaina 28 May 2019

This is really good, and if you write more poems like this, you can help lots of families. 👍

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