Saturday, November 12, 2011

The 'Bliss' Comments

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I remember the first footsteps I took into my college
I had many dreams to cherish, some others’, some mine
Occupied with solitude and nervousness
Being away from MY WORLD the very first time
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Surabhi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you

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Kee Thampi 06 December 2011

the vitreous of love of nature But I consoled myself thinking that this was too obvious With tears in eyes which only caused haze

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Kee Thampi 28 November 2011

The first few weeks here were too odious When I was trying to find myself in this mazy place But I consoled myself thinking that this was too obvious With tears in eyes which only caused haze good to write own world in words

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Vivek P. Jha 12 November 2011

Unbelievable... and what makes it even better is the thinking of the writer... hats off to Ms. Surabhi jha... :) keep writing... :)

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SURABHI JHA

SURABHI JHA

23/08/1991
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