The 'Bliss' Poem by SURABHI JHA

The 'Bliss'

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I remember the first footsteps I took into my college
I had many dreams to cherish, some others’, some mine
Occupied with solitude and nervousness
Being away from MY WORLD the very first time

The first few weeks here were too odious
When I was trying to find myself in this mazy place
But I consoled myself thinking that this was too obvious
With tears in eyes which only caused haze

When I was struggling with all these feelings
a BLISS knocked my door one day…
And with a bit of hesitation I welcomed it whole heartedly
Believing that it would shoo all my glooms away

But it gave me much more than I expected ever
Making me realize that there is also a world to live outside 'my world'
Because life is to enjoy n not for just sitting in a corner
By helping me out each time I was puzzled

I know it was not easy for the above mentioned
But it went along keeping things in place,
Helping me every time to face the storms
Always ensuring a smile on my face.

The care it showered, the sharing hands it offered
Helped me probably mend my incorrigibility
Because the response to my rudeness
was always an incisive smile of forgiveness...

This bliss was undoubtedly you my sweetheart
Who slowly has become my life's integral part
And as the second's hand moves;
I wish that our friendship deepens its grooves...

For a relationship which is so pure..,
It would be cherished ever for sure :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Surabhi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you

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Kee Thampi 06 December 2011

the vitreous of love of nature But I consoled myself thinking that this was too obvious With tears in eyes which only caused haze

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Kee Thampi 28 November 2011

The first few weeks here were too odious When I was trying to find myself in this mazy place But I consoled myself thinking that this was too obvious With tears in eyes which only caused haze good to write own world in words

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Vivek P. Jha 12 November 2011

Unbelievable... and what makes it even better is the thinking of the writer... hats off to Ms. Surabhi jha... :) keep writing... :)

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SURABHI JHA

SURABHI JHA

23/08/1991
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