The Bloody Knife Poem by rain stringer

The Bloody Knife

Rating: 5.0


I stood there
Then i felt pain in my head
There was blood in my hair
I needed to go lay in bed

But after a step
I fell to the ground
I have no more pep
I have no more sound

Now i will be buried 6ft under
I have no blood i have no life
People will start to wonder
About how iwas stabbed with a knife.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jem Solley 20 November 2012

wow thats really deep and powerful, well done

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Kelsi Brockway 02 February 2012

Wow INTENSE! Awesome rhythm and such strong feelings behind it.

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