The Brave Effort Poem by Rohan Bendre

The Brave Effort

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Jack Went to Army School
There Came The Commander
'' Let's See How much can you Dare?
In the Race Can you Sprint Like a Hare.''
Jack did his Level Best but could not Suceed,
The Commander said
'' Speed is One Thing You Lack
Can you Walk holding this Heavy Sack on your Back.''
Commander was not satisfied
'' The Enemies will tear you Apart
If you fail to Learn Marshall Arts.''
Jack was not Good in Marshall Arts.
The Commander said
'' Efforts need to be Faster
You can't Continue
As we need boys who are smarter.''
Jack was unhappy. He returned Home.
Jack's Grandfather said
'' Your Failure should not be the End.
There are many things you can do.''
Grand Father Continued
'' When You see Corruption
It is your Right to Interruption.''
Grand father Continued
'' To The Anti social Elements A Threat you Should Pose.
Every Criminal Activity You should Oppose.''
Grand father said
'' For Mercy You should have no Place
One who tries to Destroy our Nation.
For Such People Prison is the Ultimate Destination.''
I Proud to be Indian

Tuesday, July 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: corruption,elements,enemies,father,grandfather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 23 July 2013

A great poem, like it.

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