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The Breez Was Empty

Rating: 5.0

step into my reality
watch me as i fight
perection.
on my right -feilds
and rivers.
on my left- wonder
and wine.
in the middle -a path
leading to rebellion,
and obedience.

step in my world
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WE CAN COMPETE, SEEK, LEARN & CONTORT OUR BRAINS....BUT LIFE WILL ONLY BE OF ABSOLUTE WHENCE WE ARE ABSOLUTELY GONE FROM HERE...NICE TWIST ON THE FRUSTRATIONS OF LIFE...'''''''''''''FRANK TEN SPOT!

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Simone Inez Harriman 24 October 2005

I liked this one David. I believe we do rebel against perfection at the best of times as it seems to be the way we are in the world. Thank you for the thoughts.

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David Gerardino 16 January 2005

The point of the poem is, thier is no perfection.

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Poetry Hound 04 January 2005

Did you mean to say 'perfection' and 'fields? ' Interesting piece. I'm not sure I get it. Why would you fight perfection? And how does a path lead both to rebellion and obedience? I guess anything is possible but you don't give enough clues to go on.

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