The Breeze Blows At Dawn Poem by Istabraq Al Ahmadi

The Breeze Blows At Dawn

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The breeze blows at dawn:
Honeysuckle berries
Awaken the birds.

Monday, July 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: harmony
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Antony Theodore 22 November 2018

Breeze, dawn honey, berries, chirping of the birds joyously flying. tony

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Roseann Shawiak 22 July 2016

Your haiku definitely portrays the harmony of nature with the rising sun and awakening birds. A very simple yet serene picture touched my mind as I read it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Nosheen Irfan 21 July 2016

Beautiful haiku. vivid imagery. A very captivating picture of dawn.

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Marieta Maglas 18 July 2016

Awaken the birds. - it's a beautiful idea

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Thanks a lot Marieta Maglas. it was very kind of you to read my haiku and leave a comment.

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi

Istabraq Al Ahmadi

Iraq/ Al Anbar/ Ramadi
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