Savannah Begin


The Burning Ghost - Poem by Savannah Begin

It's as if I had awoken from a dream

Everything once desired, lost

A lifeless brain inside of me

An icy core that's trimmed with frost


At times I close my eyes to see

A ghost of you that burns my thoughts

Your voice as calming as the sea

That twists my insides into knots


I reminisce about your laugh

A lovely tune that danced about

You've always been my better half

Your love for me was surged with doubt


But now the years have faded fast

I grasp to every moment shared

Before you left I should've asked

Did you ever know how much I cared?


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A man who's been in love with his childhood friend loses her before he gets the chance to tell her

Comments about The Burning Ghost by Savannah Begin

  • (8/20/2012 1:58:00 PM)


    I liked the poem a lot. You always wonder after a break up. You can become numb, but when they leave, circumstances become clearer. Good write of emotion. Thanks for sharing it with us! (Report) Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (8/17/2012 1:56:00 PM)


    I do have one question: Why the double spacing? (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (8/17/2012 1:54:00 PM)


    I am glad that I read this one. Well done. Read mine - To Maurice -
    Adeline
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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/9/2012 3:50:00 AM)


    yeah, this work is a tragic lovely pinky romantic amazing one! the feeling of not saying and not mentioned speeches will always stay in our hearts, and it also hurts us! the meaning can be related to that.! i really enjoy reading this poem, so nice and beautiful work! keep the good work up!
    Well done
    Ellias
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 8, 2012



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