Toshie Nohara

The Burnt Cake - Poem by Toshie Nohara

Pretty icing with
fresh flowers
Burnt cake on
the table
Twelve year old
comforting herself
Next attempt could
be better
There's still plenty
of flour
And butter
And eggs and
And I am going
to bake again
and again
You see!

Topic(s) of this poem: hope

Comments about The Burnt Cake by Toshie Nohara

  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/20/2015 1:39:00 AM)

    Very smooth sailing. simple and beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Rahman Henry (11/20/2015 1:29:00 AM)

    My vote for your poem: 10+++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/20/2015 1:27:00 AM)

    Yes, next attempt could be better... try again and again.... we all are with this hope; excellent poem to read again and again..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 20, 2015

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