Tuesday, June 19, 2007

The Cat Will Know Comments

Rating: 5.0

Again the rain will fall
on the sweet pavements,
a light rain
like a breath or a footstep.
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Joseph Daly 03 August 2007

There is a similarity in treatment of the cat metaphore there as in the Neruda. This has a much more relaxed approach. Neruda's cat threatened to pounce, but here there is a feeling of the cat being at one with itself: serenity! Your use of the metaphor is astonishing and you have drawn attention to the individual to be at one with itself. In this sense it is as a continuation of the Neruda.

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