The Chant Of War Poem by Vincent Dali

The Chant Of War

Rating: 5.0


(Holla) Rain, Rain
Go Away
Come Again Another Day

(Holla) Pain, Pain
Dispel
Come Again Some Other Way

Holla With A Strain, Strain
You Won't Get Blown Away
Live To Fight Just One More Day

Saturday, January 24, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Ching 22 February 2009

full of determination and very upbeat...if only people thought of your chant every time they felt like giving up/in, perserverance might be a much more common quality today...

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Stacey Watts 17 February 2009

Very good piece with a nice beat. Awesome job!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

Lets war be by war.................lets win the war.......and win back our life.Nice chant.

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Hope Wallin 25 January 2009

Very nice! I like the last stanza, it's really awesome!

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